Hypothesis
Are concussions a problem in
football today? Some people say it isn’t, but I beg to differ especially now
with the lack of excellent equipment. I believe the school is at fault, (the
attacker in this case) should be at blame. Many people state their opinion and
say that “there is a concussion proof helmet”. I say different Students perform
at higher levels to compete with other athletes for their schools athletic
events however it seems as if their efforts are sometimes not appreciated. Many
students suffer from concussions due to high impact blows to the head mainly
because of unreliable sporting equipment.
Context:
While gathering my information, my
target group was people from the ages of 15- 40 and I tried to get a balanced
amount of male and female opinions on my topic because I wanted to get
different views. I had also wanted about ½ of the people to be football lovers
and the other amount to not know anything about it. I think that the
information that I gathered was valid because it was a mixture of people. I
have surveyed a total of 30 people. 15 of each gender.
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Questions
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Common answers
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Male : Female
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What role do you play
in football? Player, coach, fan, parent, ex-player, none
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None
player
coach
fan
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2:8
5:0
5:0
3:7
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What do you or have you
played for? Pe-we, middle school, high school, college, semi pro, pro, none
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None
High school
College
pro
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5:15
6:0
3:0
1:0
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You are an active
player/coach/fan/parent/ of football true, false
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True
False
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12:10
3:5
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Are you male or
female?
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Male
female
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15:0
0:15
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Do You think
concussions are a problem in football? Yes, no
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Yes
no
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15:14
0:1
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Which needs the most
attention
Concussions, penalty
for causing concussions, returning to soon from concussion injury’s
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Concussions
Penalty for causing
Returning to soon
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11:9
4:1
0:5
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Who should be fined
or suspend in the act of a concussion?
Player that caused,
coaching staff, athletic staff, no one
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Player
Coaching
Athletic
No one
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2:1
2:0
0:0
11:14
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Should plays such as
kickoff be banned? Yes, no
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Yes
No
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0:0
15:15
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In your own words how
has a concussion changed your life or someone’s life you know?
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I have had many
concussions and it is now harder to remember things
I have never
experience one
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11:1
4:14
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In your own words
describe a concussion proof helmet, if there is one?
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There isn’t one
Ones that have softer
insides
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10:0
5:15
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*Data Analysis:
After analyzing my data I have
found that males think concussions are more important than the other choices
(the penalty for causing a concussion and the return to soon for concussion
injuries). I believe this is because males tend to watch more sports than
females, also I believe this is because a lot of males have had concussions
because many of the males that took my survey said they had experienced a
concussion before. I had more males answer the question more correctly for my
hypothesis than the females. I think the females answered how they answered
because a lot of women are protective and they would think that returning to
soon would be more important than concussions its self (The second most
answered choice). The most common trend that I found in my data was that most of
the respondents believed that this topic
is a problem all over the United States because statistics show that the
rate of concussions due to sports has increased. I think that the drive to
compete and win can cause children and adolescents to become injured (any head
injuries). The main focus for students' safety has been pointed primarily at
high school students. Many people shy away from the younger students because
they don't feel that they are much to worry about. But recently there has been
a huge increase in concussions to younger children.
Due to my lack of information from
my respondents, I wasn’t able to get as accurate survey answers because I left
out some key questions. The main questions that I left out were I feel that if
I included these questions in my survey then the information that I received
from the respondents would have been more accurate/ to the point. I would have
had a better conclusion about the different views that various people have
towards my topic. I believe that if I would have put the more specific
questions in my conclusion would be more to the point and informing.
*Conclusion:
Reflecting back to my hypothesis. I
was correct about concussions being a serious thing in football today but
because of the lack of suspensions and fines for causing a concussion
concussions will “live on” if the NHSFL (national high school football league)
would put forth more effort to rules. Maybe players can play without fear of
getting a concussion.
Follow up:
From this point I want to go in deeper to this
research and show the community’s and
community’s to come the different disasters that sports related injuries can
cause; and how important it is to be monitored for concussions and injuries of
that nature to the head because these injuries are being found more often in a
younger generation. My most essential research question that should be
researched is “Should new sports equipment be bought every few years to help
ensure the safety of students.” From all
of my research I don’t plan to change my research topic. But I have thought
about doing so because it is hard for me to find strong points in my research.
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