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Monday, May 27, 2013

arguemenative speach



                                                Concussions
Are concussions a problem in football today? Some people say it is not, but I beg to differ especially now with the lack of advanced equipment. The school is at fault, (the attacker in this case) should be at blame. One reason concussions are a problem in American football now is because once a player gets a concussion he gets or she gets a major spurt of depression       (Steve Fainaru). Another reason is because the fact that it is impossible to make a concussion proof helmet. Many people state their opinion and say that “there is a concussion proof helmet”. I say different Students perform at higher levels to compete with other athletes for their schools athletic events however it seems as if their efforts are sometimes not appreciated. Many students suffer from concussions due to high impact blows to the head mainly because of unreliable sporting equipment. Concussions are a big issue in football; Concussions are a high risk in all levels of football in today’s time, because there are so many football players getting injured with concussions now. No one is really doing anything to do about it.
Have you ever had a concussion? Well I have had many of them in my life my first one was when I was in 3rd grade I ran into a door and cracked my head on the ground. But When I was in eighth grade, I was always getting hurt with broken fingers and I also received two concussions. Then in ninth grade, I had received three concussions. With my most recent concussion, I forgot all my “plays” and I was not able to remember anything before the game. All I could remember was that the time left in the game was 4:16, and the score was 21-0. My coach doubted me and put me back in. While I was in, I was not able to do my “job”; I was letting blocks in, always forgetting my plays, and asking where I go and what do I do. Later, after my coach had pulled me out from the game he took a look at my eyes and was shocked to find out that he was almost positive that I had a concussion and had me out. I was out for the rest of the game, and I was lying on the bench. After, the game was over and my mom picked me up we rushed to the hospital and had my brain checked out with a CAT scan. When, the doctor came back with the results he told me and my mom that I had a concussion from a “kill shot, blind side or a big hit”. I was not able to play the rest of the year. Even though my coaches still wanted me to play.
            It is not even just football that concussions are a problem; there is a huge up rise in concussions in soccer, lacrosse, and hockey players. The number of girls suffering concussions in soccer accounts for the second largest amount of all concussions reported by young athletes, according to the American Journal of Sports Medicine.  (Football tops the list.)  Most prominent have been news media reports about scores of relatively young former professional athletes reporting serious cognitive problems and other later-life illnesses. Several ex-N.F.L. players who have committed suicide, most notably Junior Seau, a former San Diego Chargers and New England Patriots star, have been found posthumously to have had a degenerative brain disease linked to repeated head trauma (Bill Pennington).
 Many players in the NFL last year joined the agreement. Just about 4,200 of the league's 12,000 former players have joined the litigation. Some are battling dementia, depression or Alzheimer's disease, and fault the league for rushing them back on the field after concussions. Others are worried about developing problems and want their health monitored (Munson). Former players and family members on hand for the hearing included Kevin Turner, a former Philadelphia Eagles running back now battling Lou Gehrig's disease; Dorsey Levens, a veteran running back who made a 2012 documentary on concussions called "Bell Rung," and Mary Ann Easterling, whose husband, former Atlanta Falcons safety Ray Easterling, was the lead plaintiff in the litigation before he committed suicide last year (Munson).
Imagine that you drive a car straight into a building at 40 mph. Despite airbags and seatbelts, you’d probably feel lucky to be alive. But when an NFL wide receiver meets a safety head-on, we expect them both to get back up to play second down.  The difference in a car crash, you stop in a matter of feet, in an NFL impact, you stop in inches. In the eyes of physics; a big hit on the field can be just as devastating as a car crash--or in many cases, worse. “We’re expecting a mere 1.5 inches of foam and candy shell to decelerate a player’s head gently enough to prevent their brain from bouncing around inside their skull and causing poorly understood, but permanent and devastating injury. After talking to some of the brightest minds in helmet design, helmet testing and football physics, the elephant in the room became clear: A concussion-proof helmet is a pipe dream. If the NFL wants concussion-free football, they’ll need to redesign football” (Belinda Lanks). She is right in more than just her eyes she is right in many of professionals because you could just as easily get a concussion from whiplash as impact. In football, one man wants to go somewhere, and his opponent doesn’t want him to. This basic tension leads to a lot of body smashing big people slamming into one another at high speeds. It’s a recipe for concussions, which, despite the helmets that football players wear and the millions of dollars the NFL has poured into research on preventing brain injuries, are still a huge issue in the sport.

            Concussions occur as a result of a collision with another object while the object or person is moving at a high rate of speed. Forces such as these (and others) can result in deceleration and rotational concussive injuries. The high velocity movement of the head during a whiplash event alone could produce the same effects. So actually both of these are reasons we get concussions and helmets players use in football don’t helps us much.


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